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Lucy in the Sky

Lucy in the SkyA sudden coolness touches skinAs remnants of a passing fanRock from side to side Click whirr, Click whirr RemorselesslyA drool of sweat runs downwardsIn the evening heatDripping...

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We must have been listening to the same radio program this morning TB. It needs a little work in places even for free verse, but then again you have that atrocious accent.

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Teagen, I enjoyed this so much because you presented your thoughts much like a short story and made me the reader feel a part of this moment, watching Lucy in the Sky rise again. Lorraine

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Accent, you have the bloody nerve to say I have an accent.Well I suppose I have and I'm proud of it and have developed it with age, and it's bloody 100% better than that antquated one you have and...

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Thanks darlin!It's a fascinating story. There is this old red sun mega light years away that is so old it's compressed down to the size of the Earth and because of this, it's one huge diamond. Of...

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I like this, T. Very vivid imagery - I was even swatting at that mozzie!!

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The same one that got me three times last night. Thanks Etain

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Well that's wonderful - I didn't know there really was a star named Lucy.And that's why it's 'with diamonds'.Son of a gun.:-0

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Yepppp can you imagine a diamond the size of the Earth. Thats one hell of an engagement ring, and to use a modern expresion, it would be real hot.

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Dear Teagan,I enjoyed this one especially, due to tone and content. I immediately thought of the red diamonds they've unearthed at the Argyle Mines. Don't know if I'm spelling "Argyle" correctly, but...

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The spelling looks correct to me T. One things for sure, I can't afford one.

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This is great because the first two verses deal with a very earlthy mundane moment, and as the character looks up the last two verses deal with the wonders of the night sky and lift the reader's...

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I don't know what your name is, so I shall Australianise you and call you Ozzie.I love your icon btw, and you comment about it being a foreign setting makes me laugh. I am an Australian living in OZ,...

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